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Very nice Naisaiku! Reads well, Nalini.
wwwooowww...i wonder im gonna try my hands at haiku and naisaiku..the whole syllable funda gives me creeps :(awesome one there nalini... and here's an award for you..:)http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/03/16/whiff-of-glory/
Thats a nice one. Award 4 u at my blog. :)
Hi Nalini, Nicely done!
Hiya, Thanks for taking the NaiSaiKu challenge? I like the way you associated the curtain call clapping with the thunder outside, cleverly done!
wow... I havent even started with Haiku, and I am already hearing abt NaiSaiku...
So well done. We want more!
It works well, but I think if you leave out the first and last line it works a little better. Either way it stays within NaiSaiKu guidelines.
Reads better now?...thanks for the suggestion Stan
new to Naisaiku, I am not good with poetry though, your poetry blog is amusing to read
wow....thats very goood
Enjoyed this, thank you for sharing……robImage & Verse
Clever imagery! I like it...
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