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Tuesday, November 2, 2010

Pen and Paper - Haiku 176



tears and thunder
as pen touches paper-
monsoon storm






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11 COMMENTS:

♥ Braja said...

Love it Nalini :)

Purba said...

Love the way you play with words.

zephyr said...

Wow!

(a three letter comment for a three line marvel :))

Shashi said...

Its very nice, specially since I like and some times write free type of Haiku, hence I have enjoyed this very much. You created a beautiful image..

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Om Namah Shivaya
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dr.antony said...

Meaningful,I would say.

iti said...

nice poetry..it has so deep meaning and each word tells its own significance and meaning.

S.R.Ayyangar said...

Just 9 words and a storm of feelings aptly described.

Coral said...

nice

Nethra said...

That's what exactly happens with every writer, isn't it?

Nice haiku! :)

Archana Sarat said...

Wow. Your poetry sounds good! Visit my blog http://seesawwriting.blogspot.com/

Would love to know your views!

Archana Sarat

AmitAag said...

An off the beat layout combined with
beautiful verses! I'm your 200th follower Nalini on Blogspot.
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