Open Mind: Haiku 91 fort

Wednesday, March 10, 2010

sandstone fort ruins

boys in bright turbans

cartwheel on lawns

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Pramathesh said...: somehow I just feel that it is for me only.

I don't know why.; March 10, 2010 at 1:36 PM
Nalini Hebbar said...: Pramathesh...every haiku has a ku factor...it works for some and doesn't for others...ku factor is when the comparison I intended suddenly dawns on you...it's a spiritual vision...a moment of understanding...like a flash things falls in place
I hate explaining my haiku...but here goes...
In this haiku...the old tired fort is witness to cartwheels(time) of youth...old against new...the colour of sandstone against the colourful turbans...old gives way to the young; March 10, 2010 at 6:15 PM
Anonymous said...: awesome as always nalini...
im completely in awe; March 10, 2010 at 11:04 PM