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Wednesday, March 10, 2010

Haiku 91 fort

sandstone fort



sandstone fort ruins
boys in bright turbans
cartwheel on lawns





November 24, 2009


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3 COMMENTS:

Mr. Pramathesh™ Borkotoky said...

somehow I just feel that it is for me only.

I don't know why.

Nalini Hebbar said...

Pramathesh...every haiku has a ku factor...it works for some and doesn't for others...ku factor is when the comparison I intended suddenly dawns on you...it's a spiritual vision...a moment of understanding...like a flash things falls in place
I hate explaining my haiku...but here goes...
In this haiku...the old tired fort is witness to cartwheels(time) of youth...old against new...the colour of sandstone against the colourful turbans...old gives way to the young

megzone said...

awesome as always nalini...
im completely in awe