the wind reads my dairy
one page every second
fly flowers & peacock feathers
THE WIND READS MY DIARY
fly flowers & peacock feathers
one page every second
the wind reads my dairy
© Nalini Hebbar/openmind/2009 - all rights reserved
http://naisaiku.blogspot.com
13 COMMENTS:
Hi Nalina, thanks for taking The NaisaiKu Challenge?
Beautiful words and what a great thought.
Should it read Diary?
Hiya!
Lovely, I can see the pages turning in the wind!
really nice one!:)
Refreshing piece, great imagary.
You should have a new flag on your counter now - Thailand.
The verse is good but what is NaiSaiku
Welcome to my blog...hope you have a nice time!
@ Andy...ooops...typo!
@Stan...Thailand...love your food!
Welcome Wendy and Soecerer!
@ Farila...do follow the link on the post...you may like it
its beautiful ... loved the imagery of wind reading the diary... awesome :)
such sweet words...I could actually imagine the dry flowers and feathers flying with the wind :)
great one Nalini..
aahh...breath-taking..
i'm yet to get the hang of NaiSaiku.. someday i shall :)
and here's an award for being the awesomest poet around :)
http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/03/09/poetic-resonance/
Naisaiku after Haiku! Your desert is complete with a Cherry on Top of the cream! Beautiful variety, Nalini.
Really sweet...the image one gets while reading is so nice... off to chk Naisaiku...
Ah, I love the imagery and delicate words in this NaiSaiKu.
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