Open Mind: Haiku 100 sardines

Friday, March 19, 2010

Haiku 100 sardines

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packed like sardines

on the suburban-

I swim out

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15 COMMENTS:

Hemanth Potluri said...: nice haiku yaar :)..

urs..hemu..; March 19, 2010 at 8:49 AM
Chapters From My Life said...: Sardines.. LOL.. only these smell of sweat.; March 19, 2010 at 9:05 AM
Matty said...: That's a real good description of the subway. Nice job.; March 19, 2010 at 9:14 AM
♥ Braja said...: Fantastic image, Nalini...yours?

I've only ever written Japanese Haiku, and like it's rhythm and consistency more than "English Haiku," which is an adaptation of the original and I think loses something...but the elments of opposed elements exists, and that's the cool thing about Haiku; March 19, 2010 at 9:20 AM
Parth J Dave said...: Very well done, Nalini!

The methaphorical effect in this Haiku is just awesome....!; March 19, 2010 at 11:24 AM
Anonymous said...: Superb Pic..; March 19, 2010 at 12:52 PM
Noni said...: nice blog..pics and your writing..
loves your haiku creations; March 19, 2010 at 2:29 PM
Karan Agrawal said...: The pic is just amazing!; March 19, 2010 at 2:48 PM
Anonymous said...: The picture and the verse go very nicely together!; March 19, 2010 at 11:06 PM
bollywoodstylediaries said...: I dont think I can eat sardines again!!

nice haiku!!

sonali
http://bollywoodstylediaries.blogspot.com; March 19, 2010 at 11:25 PM
Tulika said...: woaah..!

Great one. :); March 20, 2010 at 8:55 AM
Anonymous said...: lolz... wattay comparison with Sardines.. but take it from me who travels in trains daily... u are bang on target.. it is indeed like a pack of sardines.. each waiting to swim out at the earliest possible way...
awesome Haiku as always :); March 20, 2010 at 11:28 AM
Shail said...: Indeed, packed like sardines! :); March 20, 2010 at 4:14 PM
Nashsingh said...: Very elegant!; March 20, 2010 at 8:30 PM
Nethra said...: Sardines stink, don't they?
I have never been in train.; March 20, 2010 at 10:45 PM