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nice haiku yaar :)..urs..hemu..
Sardines.. LOL.. only these smell of sweat.
That's a real good description of the subway. Nice job.
Fantastic image, Nalini...yours? I've only ever written Japanese Haiku, and like it's rhythm and consistency more than "English Haiku," which is an adaptation of the original and I think loses something...but the elments of opposed elements exists, and that's the cool thing about Haiku
Very well done, Nalini!The methaphorical effect in this Haiku is just awesome....!
nice blog..pics and your writing..loves your haiku creations
The pic is just amazing!
The picture and the verse go very nicely together!
I dont think I can eat sardines again!!nice haiku!!sonalihttp://bollywoodstylediaries.blogspot.com
woaah..!Great one. :)
lolz... wattay comparison with Sardines.. but take it from me who travels in trains daily... u are bang on target.. it is indeed like a pack of sardines.. each waiting to swim out at the earliest possible way... awesome Haiku as always :)
Indeed, packed like sardines! :)
Sardines stink, don't they?I have never been in train.
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