Friday, October 15, 2010

Wonder- Acrostic Poetry

When you stop dreaming, you stop living!
Out of the box, into the space yonder go
Nonchalantly jaunt from star to star,
Draw out the elf that dwells deep within
Entrapped and waiting to laugh aloud and
Reach out, pick a star you wish to don!

submitted 3/21/20100 12:17:33 AM

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eN said...

Such a short and sweet one. Liked the last two lines a lot. Profound!

Purba said...

Dreams are the touchstones of our character.

Ramesh Sood said...

Not what I expected here
Absolutely unique and special
Loved it the way it's created
Intelligent use of thoughts
Natural flow all the way
Interesting last line, wonderul!

My attempt on acrostic, Nalini.. indeed wonderful acrostic yours..

Uma Anandane said...

Wonder..done that Acrostic beautiful!

Nanka said...

Beautiful Acrostic Nalini and I can feel the sweet touch of Haiku here too. You must write for "Acrostic Only" a meme which is hosted by Amias and Leo. It is quite a challenge and I love it. Please do share your beautiful works in acrostics there too.

डा0 हेमंत कुमार ♠ Dr Hemant Kumar said...

Yes we can't immegine our life without dreams..nice poem.

dr.antony said...

Nonchalantly ..seems to bump out for the sake of acrostic.
Poets are generally dreamers.

Unknown said...

Nice as always...

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