Open Mind: Blemish - Haiku Heights

Monday, October 11, 2010

Blemish - Haiku Heights

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refined blemish

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15 COMMENTS:

dr.antony said...: I cant describe my feelings looking at that.; October 11, 2010 at 8:07 AM
Daliana Pacuraru said...: Thank you, my friend!
Regards from Romania; October 11, 2010 at 10:13 AM
Saras said...: Very Good one! Nalini; October 11, 2010 at 2:15 PM
Amity said...: Hi Nalini;

so thoughtful verses...i guess it means much deeper...:-)

was a li'l bit frightened with the mask, I always do, dunno why!

thanks for taking part in my prompt suggestion Nalini.. :-); October 11, 2010 at 2:26 PM
eyeography said...: Amazing...so well written... :); October 11, 2010 at 3:59 PM
Nanka said...: Amazing picture to aptly describe the Haiku lines.It surely is a very refined blemish.; October 11, 2010 at 8:30 PM
Jingle said...: stunning!; October 11, 2010 at 11:35 PM
Hari said...: Nice verse. The mask looks like a Venetian mask.; October 12, 2010 at 3:42 AM
Anonymous said...: Awesome! Just awesome. Just nitpicking - is this 'form' correct as per Haiku? I don't know, honestly, just asking :-)
Loved your Haiku.; October 12, 2010 at 6:15 PM
Nalini Hebbar said...: @Writerzblock...haiku is a Japanese form and the set syllables are for the Japanese language. English has a different way of counting syllables and thus a total of 17 or less would make a haiku more readable and expressive....do read 'how to write a haiku' by following the link.; October 12, 2010 at 9:26 PM
Uma Anandane said...: very well crafted the poem ..nice; October 12, 2010 at 9:45 PM
Anonymous said...: Haiku for thought and I couldn't agree more that there is beauty in the blemish. Great pen :); October 12, 2010 at 11:57 PM
Bing Yap said...: profound thoughts and perfect imagery... great haiku!; October 13, 2010 at 8:18 PM
डा0 हेमंत कुमार ♠ Dr Hemant Kumar said...: Nalini,
Haiku's words and picture ---both are creating nice kolas.
best wishes.
Hemant; October 15, 2010 at 12:35 AM
Strummed Words said...: The verse and picture say so much! Very nice.; October 16, 2010 at 7:18 PM