This is the first time I am writing prose. And it has turned out to be a rather long short story.
I got the first line in my head 3 days ago and I pulled out my golden diary to jot down my sentence. To my surprise, within minutes I was writing out the story and character sketch. It took an hour for the story to extend itself...yes, I swear it did...all by itself!
I hope its readers will help me with criticism. I do need it to improve with the editing and maybe with the extension of some scenes.