on the red rose
Haiku is a Japanese form of poetry and you know that the Japs like everything small ! It is easy to say a lot in long drawn sentences but a challenge to condense it to a few.
Haiku is a set of 2 images formed by words. They make sense to the reader according to his/her depth of understanding of life. More creative your imagination, more vivid your flow of thought in the direction of 'a dawn in understanding'.
Haiku is a set of 2 images formed by words. They make sense to the reader according to his/her depth of understanding of life. More creative your imagination, more vivid your flow of thought in the direction of 'a dawn in understanding'.
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13 COMMENTS:
Sorry but these lines don't carry any emotion .I feel so ...
May be i am an emotionless person :)
Regards
Arvind Chugh
http://www.zindagiilive.com/
Welcome to my blog, Arvind!
I am sorry my haiku did nothing for you...it falls flat for many...its not that you lack emotions, it could be that some other things click for you...anyway, thanks for visiting...:)
Hi Nalini...
Just wanted to know, Haikus don't have titles??
I always read ur post before promoting on IndiVine:-)
Sonali
http://bollywoodstylediaries.blogspot.com
Lovely! Simple yet hard hitting. Though I kinda wish it was a little longer. Still, two thumbs up! :)
ooh myyy...
Nalini..
yet again you have captured me and had me awestruck dumbfounded and spellbound by your haiku..
that was simply suppperrrrbbb.....
i am bereft of words to emote my feelings at this piece of art :)
You Rock..!!
wow! very beautiful.
ooh....i'm dumb enough to not understand it.... :)
Haiku's must be really difficult....i mean for the readers too.....and the writer ....obviously.....trying to make as simple so that a lame man like me can understand it.....
:)
hitesh...I like your note about it being difficult on the reader!...LOL hope I am not torturing you with my haiku...:(
no torture..
this reminded me of one instance....we were in school...and we were sitting in a group....when on demand....one of the girl sang for us......because she was a punjabi she sang a folk punjabi song which totally went above our head....well atleast mine's....
then at the end she asked...."how was it??"
i told her....."It was beautiful....i really liked it.....but i would have liked it way much more...if i could understand it :) "
same is thing here.... :)
Thank you so much for your support! Love this image.
wow nice
i really enjoyed
Mahes
good one
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