Have to confess that I'm not so familiar with haiku works. But the way you write haiku make me read it and enjoy it, and this is the first time I'm reading haiku form and have started to like it very much. Keep up the good work and hope to read more from you.
@ Rumya...you got the meaning abs right... opening from a closed state is very difficult and needs a lot of courage...it applies to nature as well as to the human mind in the emotional, rational and social context sacrifice and thinking beyond self as the flower does in it's beautiful and envious life is very difficult too.
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Rejoice as the cycle continues!! Such a balance maintained.
I rejoiced on seeing the picture, what a breath-taking colorful pic.
Naliniji, I have a surprise for you in my blog. An award!!
lovelyyyy :D
Beautiful picture,.and your usual style. Is it lotus seed?
I like this senryu.
is it love poetry or missing muse or nothing?
This is beautiful..well said..
What a lovely poem.
Nalini,
It's very attractive picture with nice words.
Hemant
The flower sacrifices itself for the seed and for continuation of the cycle. Lovely interpretation of the prompt! :)
truly rejoice. what a unique plant!
Lovely photograph. Conveys a lot!
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RoHiT
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Have to confess that I'm not so familiar with haiku works. But the way you write haiku make me read it and enjoy it, and this is the first time I'm reading haiku form and have started to like it very much. Keep up the good work and hope to read more from you.
I would like to exchange links with your site nalinihebbar-poetry.blogspot.com
Is this possible?
the haiku and image are great together! what a brilliant piece!
Rejoice (Haiku)
@ Rumya...you got the meaning abs right...
opening from a closed state is very difficult and needs a lot of courage...it applies to nature as well as to the human mind in the emotional, rational and social context
sacrifice and thinking beyond self as the flower does in it's beautiful and envious life is very difficult too.
beautiful picture in a beautiful frame of words.
Beautiful analogy nicely captured!Well written, Nalini.
Love the haiku and the pic.
But what is it exactly ?
Have never seen it before.
@ Haddock...that's a lotus seed head.
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