Open Mind: Haiku 164 wipers

Monday, September 27, 2010

ducks in a V-

car wipers

clear the route

Bikramjit Singh Mann said...: I am trying to come to grips with this form of poetry..

loved this one short and simple easy to understand :)

Bikram's Blog; September 27, 2010 at 6:17 PM
Ramesh Sood said...: Oh, that's really good one!; September 27, 2010 at 10:58 PM
Nethra said...: I tried writing haiku....but failed greatly. You are really good at it.; September 27, 2010 at 11:15 PM
dr.antony said...: Honestly, I didn't understand a thing.Old timer,may be.; September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nanka said...: Love the idea of the Geese flying in the 'v' shaped formation... connecting it to the wipers is a clever ploy. Another great one from you as usual.; September 28, 2010 at 12:20 PM