Love is all about lines.
Love lines of healthy love.
Lines drawn with the arrow
that pierced two hearts.
As in love they fall
lines themselves draw.
Lines that redefine
tolerance and sacrifice.
Lines so bent you now
call them arcs.
Lines that with passing time
change in length.
As backsteps both take
to accommodate.
Lines that define the space
that need surround.
No lines should trespass
into freedom spaces.
Assertive lines that
draw the limits.
Respect these lines
for love to grow.
Lines at a tangent
that that cross often.
Never should run parallel
as if paths preset.
© Nalini Hebbar/openmind/2009 - all rights reserved
10 COMMENTS:
No lines should trespass
into freedom spaces.
Very right indeed.Thanks for sharing this wonderful poetry..great way to start my day.
Very true!!
Liked these...
Assertive lines that
draw the limits.
Respect these lines
for love to grow.
Simply beautiful! :)
heavy stuff. I'll have to grow up a little more to understand all these lines I guess ;)
Nice one..after a long time I am able to understand any of your poem...though reading them was always a treat....
thats really a nice one... relationships need some wrk to be done... love is always not sufficient...
Two line become one,two souls become one,emotional and personal space disolves,everything becomes one.That's love they say.
Isn't the two line concept valid for a traditional relationship only ... wonder how it would play in a polygamous relationship ... :)
It is beautiful and too true. Thank you.
Very true.... Love is all about understanding each other... the more the better..
Awesome
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