Open Mind: Haiku 102 boys

Tuesday, March 23, 2010

Haiku 102 boys

Here I have played with the word 'peek' and used it instead of the word 'peak'.

heat waves peek-

naked boys dive

into the river

How to write a Haiku

The photo was modified on Picasa 3.

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8 COMMENTS:

magiceye said...: lovely!; March 23, 2010 at 10:14 AM
Chapters From My Life said...: I can almost see my son among those boys... he loves being in water.; March 23, 2010 at 5:13 PM
Sparkling Star said...: AWESOME!!!!!!!; March 23, 2010 at 9:05 PM
Anonymous said...: perfect sumer retreat :D
awesome Nalini :D; March 23, 2010 at 9:43 PM
subu.ps said...: good one. The foto is perfect. You r tempting me make a dive like that.; March 24, 2010 at 10:07 AM
Deepa Gopal said...: Agree with Subu...the pic is perfect for the verse!!!

The haiku is too good, perfect for the climate here as well as ther, I believe:)); March 24, 2010 at 5:33 PM
Karan Agrawal said...: Good one!
I tried writing Haiku, not an easy stuff...really appreciate.; March 24, 2010 at 6:37 PM
Rajendra Raikwar said...: Nice One; November 21, 2011 at 4:20 PM